oh god
This whole, "oh I'm so sad 'cause i lost my Girl Friend, But making a cartoon about it to Coldplay songs will make it better" cliché is really pretty lame, and your animation was pretty buggy and glitchy. And that Glare throught the window needs to be redone, it would be more realistic with out those stright outlines.
over all it was alright, but I don't know about top 5